Hello, I am happy to present to you the

Cursed Trains Remake

I've been working on this for some time. The intro is fully done. It's playable!

Here a little picture:
http://fs5.directupload.net/images/user/170713/n32oxfjr.jpg

Here is the Level Link

I am curious about your feedback.

This level is pretty cool. You've got actual voice acting which is well done and the story so far is interesting. My main criticism is the visuals. You seem to be going for a realistic look in the level but everything seems a little stiff and kind of block-like which looks unnatural to me, but maybe that is your intent.

I'd have a look at some of Faith_rip's old LBP1 levels to see what I mean. He did a really good job of creating a realistic look in his levels without them seeming too grid-like.

I am focusing on story, emotions and visuals. I don't want to create super realistic environments. I want to create a cool looking world with nice characters.

But don't get me wrong: I appreciate your feedback and I'll definetely try something out in my future levels.