So I made something again. Just one song as it's only a small part of my next big thing but I wanted to be flashy and show off so - voila!! 

Only difference with this, and probably the reason I'm looking for feedback on this one is because I've decided to include the lyrics I wrote to go with the tune. Part of me feels like it's a bit 'taking myself way too seriously' and another part of me is like 'why not?'. The another part chips in like, 'are these lyrics actually really cheesy and rubbish?'... Regardless, they're there as a sort of test I guess. 

Here's the level here: https://lbp.me/v/qx7fr9t/

All feedback (good and bad) is definitely welcome, although I hope you enjoy!!

Thanks!

Wow this is sounding excitingly! Additional lyrics are something rather personal! I will check it out in the evening!

Many greetings, Jürgen^^

i'll be giving it a look for sure, dude.