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Grammar Land Groupies!

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2012-11-17 01:46:00 / Author: bluesteel
Hey all, my new level.
Grammar Land Groupies! (1P)

Oh noes, teh grammer guyy haz gonn missign nd evry1 haz forggoten hao too spel!
Go and find him to restore grammar and spelling to the land! And quick!

Introducing the Minionator, the awesome new powerup that gives you the ability to create your own mini-you....your own minion!
http://i8.lbp.me/img/ft/93844727a352c53091c2c5dee1855843b020ce65.jpg

Featuring some crazy characters....
http://ie.lbp.me/img/ft/0beb51dc40780b7c115847c99d3d481afa6c7141.jpg
http://i0.lbp.me/img/ft/480298e3137d89532e1246812ffaccc34cf69da5.jpg
http://i7.lbp.me/img/ft/00789ca78fe3d9e108ed78f0fa4ac72641f13594.jpg
http://i3.lbp.me/img/ft/a63e59fe9f0dad44f2f350821f9d5d709c05fb70.jpg
http://i0.lbp.me/img/ft/0200840c13660fcbea4fccf12568d63c3762c5df.jpg
http://ib.lbp.me/img/ft/b8b2b240f4ebc7969fddf9184c3d58869ac49631.jpg


And some pretty scenery....
http://ic.lbp.me/img/ft/3ccfed4ac0cc65ed2ade6d79d7c33cc0d93f03b2.jpg
http://id.lbp.me/img/ft/01d5b2d9e7030d4a84621d0e5eca4369fc3b8585.jpg
http://i9.lbp.me/img/ft/08927ec473212d78dc883c5fdfedd225c48c2efb.jpg

Thanks guys, its worth a play, so please, do!
2012-11-17 01:46:00
Author:
bluesteel
Posts: 14

2012-11-17 01:49:00 / Author: DeKa1357
We picked your level in our LBFPicks Episode 21! Congrats!
2012-11-17 01:49:00
Author:
DeKa1357
Posts: 1806

2012-11-17 01:52:00 / Author: bluesteel
I heard, thanks. But I can't find LBFPicks 21, only 20. Is it not out yet?
2012-11-17 01:52:00
Author:
bluesteel
Posts: 14

2012-11-17 01:57:00 / Author: DeKa1357
We need to publish the post here but we have the level in LBP!
Link: http://lbp.me/v/gktnd5
2012-11-17 01:57:00
Author:
DeKa1357
Posts: 1806

2012-11-17 01:59:00 / Author: bluesteel
Oh, i see. That looks brilliant, overnight I got a burst of twenty or so plays, I guess your Picks Hub is why! Thanks!
2012-11-17 01:59:00
Author:
bluesteel
Posts: 14

2012-11-17 02:01:00 / Author: DeKa1357
Yes it's why! We wrote also a comment on your level via @LittleBigForum!
2012-11-17 02:01:00
Author:
DeKa1357
Posts: 1806

2012-11-17 02:03:00 / Author: bluesteel
Yeah, I got that too. Thank you so so so much!
2012-11-17 02:03:00
Author:
bluesteel
Posts: 14

2012-11-17 12:20:00 / Author: PyroTrooper91
This level is great We picked on episode 21 though, well deserved!
2012-11-17 12:20:00
Author:
PyroTrooper91
Posts: 1670

2012-11-17 12:25:00 / Author: bluesteel
May I ask when the Forum Post will be out? I'm unable to get to the hub, but I'd like to queue those fantastic levels.
2012-11-17 12:25:00
Author:
bluesteel
Posts: 14

2012-11-17 12:31:00 / Author: PyroTrooper91
Here's the hub link Episode 21

I'll be adding a list with all the picks soon though.
2012-11-17 12:31:00
Author:
PyroTrooper91
Posts: 1670

2012-11-17 12:32:00 / Author: bluesteel
Okay, cheers.
2012-11-17 12:32:00
Author:
bluesteel
Posts: 14

2012-11-17 12:38:00 / Author: PyroTrooper91
I just added the list Queue all the picks from here List Enjoy!
2012-11-17 12:38:00
Author:
PyroTrooper91
Posts: 1670

2012-11-17 12:41:00 / Author: bluesteel
Wahey, I'm featured in the GC Hub :3 and thank you, thats brill.
2012-11-17 12:41:00
Author:
bluesteel
Posts: 14

2012-11-17 16:56:00 / Author: yugnar
Played it, and I must tell you you've got a pretty great level in here. Anyway, to a more accurate review:

PRESENTATION
The thread is excellent, so many excellent pics show us the best part of the level, and make you willing to play it. The badge is a bit random but still good. I love self-made characters. Anyway, the title. I think that's the reason you got much less plays this truly desrved. Try to avoid including word such as Grammar in the title, it just make it sound educational, the least thing an LBP player is looking these days.

LEVEL
First of all, I must mention the art. It was so colorfully wonderful. Even though this random-colorful-land theme is a bit overused, this level still seemed fresh to me. The spelling mistakes were fun to read but got a bit annoying after a while, good thing you stopped using that text by the half of the level or so.

http://ie.lbp.me/img/ft/ddeff909d28860f57aa6d502bef9e0bf72407f2c.jpg

Anyway, the true fun starts after you get your lol-I-forgot-the-name-but-it-was-something-as-Minioninator. The puzzles are cleverly designed, the platforming is challenging but for me it was never confusing, and it was generally great. I don't really know what on Earth did a minion generator has to do with the previous story, but I'm glad you included it here. Anyway, a background story for that would have been nice.

The thing I loved the most about this level were its beautifully crafted characters. Some seemed quite odd and random, but the grammar guy and the squirrel-like guy were superb.

http://ia.lbp.me/img/ft/e8a8e5fb1ff023a6b7250ee5b48b690321cb2457.jpg

THE GRADES

Gameplay 4/5 This gets really interesting after you get the minion-thing. It is smartly designed and feels really original.
Graphics 4/5 Maybe a bit empty at times, but the characters were awesome and the theme was OK.
Sound 3.5/5 Good enough. I loved the Gardens music! Not exactly original, but took me back to the good old days of LBP1.
2012-11-17 16:56:00
Author:
yugnar
Posts: 766

2012-11-18 01:06:00 / Author: bluesteel
Cheers yugnar! great review, and thanks for the yay.
COuld you suggest a better title? I jus feel that it may be a bit late to change the title now, although it has only 200 plays, so maybe it isn't....
2012-11-18 01:06:00
Author:
bluesteel
Posts: 14

2012-11-19 06:22:00 / Author: yugnar
Well, I think you should leave it how it is now. It is not a bad name, actualli is pretty original, but just try to remember not including words as Spelling or Vocabulary in your next levek titles jeje
2012-11-19 06:22:00
Author:
yugnar
Posts: 766
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